Oh no, weird black guy stalks some... weird guy, stabs some girls in a school courtyard, and gets yeeted by the guy he was stalking. Sounds... "weird" when you say it like it is.
Quality is Gacha, scripting is Gacha, effects are Gacha, everything's Gacha except the plot... if you can call it a plot. No sound either.
I'm being generous when I give it 2.5 stars as it seems your style is primarily Gacha according to your pfp. If anything, add some music or practice drawing.